Seiga's Nuzlocke Adventure

Page 14 part 2
September 10th, 2012, 1:13 pm

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Posted by CharleyJay
September 10th, 2012, 8:09 pm

That was a pretty legit battle.

Your art has improved. There's a real depth and realism to it now. And the pacing and action was just so cool. Even though we all know what Giovanni's planning, you wrote it in a way that makes us wonder where else the story is going. Your Primeape is right, that Kangaskhan was a jerk. I think Primeape and Gin are my favorites.

Posted by Seiga
September 11th, 2012, 2:20 pm

@CharleyJay: Weeell you could also say that I just put more effort to it, might've improved too I guess. :u
Anyway thanks for your comment :)

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